Please read description and provide more detail to the essay and Provide more detail of what the description is asking for the essay.
Add a quote from the Koons & Pickavance reading. Need more discussion on why objective truth is important and valuable, and why the particular truth you’ve mentioned is important and valuable. Need more, and in particular more on how the example that is in your writing connected to the rest of the paper: what exactly is the important truth here, what is the truthmaker for it, etc? It’s just a matter of making sure everything that you’re thinking about in your own mind makes its way to the page so that the reader can see it too.