first of all The narrative in research design is too long
It should provide the INTRODUCTION to the paper, which includes a brief description of research problem along with a statement of your research objective(s).
More tho a substantive OUTLINE is in need.
The title “Effective Policies to Reduce Immigration” must be changed because it is already Effective so lets say using the same title but (how it is effective) turn around the title of this paper, in other points, paper should tell how it is Effective and use 1-5 policies and sources 7-10 that books talk about would be better.
And there is more information will be add about the research paper to make it clear more.